really, really good. i liked the descriptions of what being a program might feel like and the theme of who's actually running the interview. i like that despite the tagline implying we'd be reading from the admin's point of view the perspective is andy's. it creates a lot of immediate questions upon loading it that you answered very well.
Really excellent presentation, and such a strong story told in such a brief amount of words! I think it's fascinating only getting this brief glimpse into the world this computer resides in, and the bits and pieces of the more personal and raw past really give the conversation a snappy and disgruntled tone that I really enjoyed!
Thank you, I am delighted you liked it! I was really worried about it being too short a story to have the impact I intended it to so this is really good to hear <3
Neat! I liked it, lots of emotion packed into such a short time and the sound design and the screen gave it a cool tactile feel, the conversation drifting more and more into the personal and away from the whistle blowing felt very natural
Thank you so much for playing! I wanted to pack as much emotion as I could into these two characters, and half way into writing the plot that served as the backdrop I realized, if I was in the admin’s shoes this could not possibly be NOT personal. Glad that came off naturally :]
I really liked this, great presentation, great pacing especially in how the scope expanded and focused back in on the conversation itself. There is so much frustration shared between these two characters. Very excellent!
Thank you so much! Very happy to hear you enjoyed the presentation and pacing, I had fun deciding just how much these characters would share of their story and their grievances without it becoming too much exposition so really glad to hear you think it was done well :]
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really, really good. i liked the descriptions of what being a program might feel like and the theme of who's actually running the interview. i like that despite the tagline implying we'd be reading from the admin's point of view the perspective is andy's. it creates a lot of immediate questions upon loading it that you answered very well.
Excellent interface drama. The story being a brief glimpse into the past is a neat touch.
Thank you! Glad you liked it :]
Really excellent presentation, and such a strong story told in such a brief amount of words! I think it's fascinating only getting this brief glimpse into the world this computer resides in, and the bits and pieces of the more personal and raw past really give the conversation a snappy and disgruntled tone that I really enjoyed!
Thank you, I am delighted you liked it! I was really worried about it being too short a story to have the impact I intended it to so this is really good to hear <3
Neat! I liked it, lots of emotion packed into such a short time and the sound design and the screen gave it a cool tactile feel, the conversation drifting more and more into the personal and away from the whistle blowing felt very natural
Thank you so much for playing! I wanted to pack as much emotion as I could into these two characters, and half way into writing the plot that served as the backdrop I realized, if I was in the admin’s shoes this could not possibly be NOT personal. Glad that came off naturally :]
I really liked this, great presentation, great pacing especially in how the scope expanded and focused back in on the conversation itself. There is so much frustration shared between these two characters. Very excellent!
Thank you so much! Very happy to hear you enjoyed the presentation and pacing, I had fun deciding just how much these characters would share of their story and their grievances without it becoming too much exposition so really glad to hear you think it was done well :]